This was unsettling in the best way—haunting, sharp, and strangely funny at times. Polly is such a fascinating voice: eerie but weirdly charming, and the way madness and myth blur here really pulled me in. I’m hooked and definitely looking forward to the next part!
I like how you jump right into the action--I think the disorientation of waking up in an uncomfortable place goes well with the disorientation of waking up to a voice in your head!
This was unsettling in the best way—haunting, sharp, and strangely funny at times. Polly is such a fascinating voice: eerie but weirdly charming, and the way madness and myth blur here really pulled me in. I’m hooked and definitely looking forward to the next part!
I like how you jump right into the action--I think the disorientation of waking up in an uncomfortable place goes well with the disorientation of waking up to a voice in your head!
polly sounds too familiar.
quite eerie when a story mirrors my ache.
I wish I could expand the answer - but I want to show the full story to avoid spoilers, even thematic ones.
Polly is a powerful voice.